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Story units
Usually a story will consist of multiple separate story units or elements. We use such units to help describe the outline of a story, to see the story progress, and to make it easier to navigate.
Borrowing from the arts, you can apply any of these story unit hierarchies.
From literature: Volume > Book > Part > Chapter > Section > Paragraph From theatre: Play or Script > Act > Scene > Event From a script: Screenplay > Act > Scene For example: the topic you post is your story, and each reply you make is a chapter.
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Scene heading
This is based on the screenwriting terminology for a screenplay. In a screenplay, you will see how the scene is described with some basic information about where and when something is taking place. In a screenplay, you will see this written as:
Interior or exterior Location, for example: John Doe's House or Kitchen. Day or night We use a similar description to indicate where and when a story is taking place. This description also helps the reader to know whether place and time have changed as compared to a previous part of the story. Obviously, you may choose to put the time before place. This also works. Just be consistent about it.
If the location stays the same, and only time changes, you may abbreviate this to only show the time-changes. This can also be used to indicate a flashback or flash-forward.
Where are we?
Country (perhaps a bit too generic) City, Country (usually good enough) Building, City, Country (also good, and even more very specific) Chair, Room, Floor, Building, City, Country (too specific) When are we?
The date, for example: Wednesday, 8 December 1982. The time, for example: 11:00h in the morning or 20:21h in the evening. How much time has passed (optional), for example: Three days later. * * *
Characters
The first time a character is mentioned, we usually apply bolding to indicate which characters are mentioned in a story. This helps to draw attention. Additionally, this also helps to see when a new character begins to speak.
Bolding the character name also helps the reader. It allows them to more easily scan the story and see when a character is mentioned in previously in your story.
When highlighting a character name, only apply this bolding the person’s name, but not to their title. These titles can be king, president, minister, general, etc.
For example: “As Empress Joni entered the room, the old Admiral Ramius was first to rise from his chair.”
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Dialogue and thoughts
Clear and well-formatted dialogue is crucial for engaging storytelling. It's important that readers can easily understand which character is speaking and when the conversation shifts between characters. Here are some guidelines for formatting dialogue:
Always use quotation marks to enclose spoken words in quotation marks. For example: “I can't believe it's raining again,” Wayanor said. Start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. This helps readers follow the conversation. For example:
“Where are you going?” Von Starinburg asked.
“To the store,” Staffenberg replied. “We're out of milk.” Use dialogue tags to indicate who is speaking, especially when introducing new speakers or when clarification is needed. For example: “I'm sick and tired of these Perfidious Orinese,” Eugenios Goulielmos grumbled. Instead of dialogue tags, you can use action beats to show who's speaking and add context. For example: Emma crossed her arms. “I don't agree with that decision.” Maintain consistent formatting throughout your story to avoid confusing your readers. Internal thoughts give readers insight into a character's mind. Here are some ways to format thoughts:
A common method is to use italics without quotation marks. For example: John stared at the sky. I hope it doesn't rain, Deitorr thought. Similar to dialogue tags, you can use thought tags. For example: I can't believe I forgot my keys, Sarah thought, patting her pockets. If writing in third-person limited, you can simply state the character's thoughts. For example: Wayanor wondered if he had made the right choice. In first-person narratives, thoughts can be written as part of the regular narrative. For example: I gazed at the horizon, wondering what adventures awaited me. Remember, consistency is key. Choose a method for indicating thoughts and stick with it throughout your story. By following these guidelines, you'll ensure that your readers can easily follow dialogues and understand characters' internal monologues, enhancing their engagement with your story.
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Mentions
Mentioning other players can be done easily thanks to the built-in @mention feature of our website.
It helps to draw the attention of other players, since they will receive a notification which tells them they’ve been mentioned in your story.
You can make creative use of to weave a mention into your writing, but appending a suffix to a mention.
For example: “The @Stedorian, @Gotneskan, @Aurivizht, and @Pojački students were having fun at the beach.”
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Images
Visual elements can greatly enhance your storytelling. When adding images to your posts, please keep the following guidelines in mind.
We strongly encourage the use of your own creations. This could include artwork, photographs, or digital designs relevant to your story. If you're not using your own images, consider using rights-free stock image websites. These provide a wide variety of images that are safe to use without copyright concerns. For example: Openverse, Unsplash, Pexels. Another excellent source for images is Wikimedia Commons. Be sure to follow the specific licence requirements for any image you use. Please do not hotlink images from other websites, especially Discord. These links often break, leaving your post without the intended visual element. To ensure your images remain accessible, please use one of the following reliable image hosting services. Using these services will help maintain the integrity of your post and ensure that readers can enjoy the visual aspects of your story for the long term.
Imgur ImgBB Postimages CubeUpload DeviantArt Dropbox Remember, images should complement your writing, not replace it. Use them to enhance your narrative and create a more immersive experience for your readers.
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Dinkus separator
To indicate the end of one chapter or scene, and the beginning of another, we use a ‘dinkus’. What is a ‘dinkus’? From Wikipedia:
This is preferable to using a blank line, because this might not be obvious to all readers.
The simplest separators you can use are a centred * * * (three spaced asterisks) or the [ hr ] shortcut (without space, to trigger a horizontal line). The aforementioned Wikipedia article proposes more alternatives:
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Spelling
Before publishing your post, it's crucial to review your work for spelling, grammar, and consistency. This extra step ensures your writing is polished and professional, enhancing the reader's experience.
Utilise the built-in spellcheck feature in your browser. Most modern browsers come equipped with this tool, making it easy to catch basic spelling errors. We use English on this forum. Choose a specific variant and maintain consistency throughout your writing. For example: American English or British English. Mixing variants can be confusing for readers and may appear unprofessional. Be mindful of your verb tenses. Mixing past or present tense unintentionally can disrupt the flow of your narrative. Pick a primary tense for your story and stick with it unless you have a specific reason for switching. For more comprehensive language checks, consider using free browser add-ons . Some popular options include: LanguageTool or Grammarly. These tools can help identify more complex grammar issues and offer suggestions for improvement. After publishing, if you notice a mistake in your post, you can use the edit button to make corrections. This feature allows you to maintain the quality of your writing even after initial publication. Remember, thorough proofreading not only improves the readability of your post but also shows respect for your readers and fellow writers. Taking the time to polish your work demonstrates your commitment to quality storytelling.
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Out-of-character comments
Finally, you may wish to end your story with some out-of-character (OOC) comments and notes. This may be used to provide additional information that you want your reader to know.
You can use it to, for example:
give a TL;DR of what happened, describe what happened in the chapter or scene(s), explain why your character(s) did certain actions, hint at what to expect in the next chapter(s), or perhaps ask questions for feedback or suggestions, etc.
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